This has a secret meaning, i don't know vut i know this poem was written with lots of emotion. and all poems need this, great poem. keep writting.

5/5 David

Kind of short but to the point, but as i said before it leaves me with the feeling that there's more to it.... oh well really good.

Cute and too the point. I like it! much more could be said but doesn't have to be. keep the details inside and let the main things out. good write!