15 and Pregnet

by BeautifulxMess   Mar 3, 2007


I know it wasn't easy to find out the news
and to think that you couldn't go on life.
He's going to be a big part of your heart
and he's going to love you through it all.

I know you're living in a complex world
and being caught between right and wrong.
You're going to be the best you can be
and I have faith that you will try your best.

A mother's biggest love is her son
and you're going to have him always.
He's inside waiting to see your face
and to touch your for the first time.

I'll help you if you need it the most
and if you are in desperate need.
I'll stick up for you through it all
and when you can't take the pain.

Never think I'm not happy for you
because I couldn't be happier.
I can't wait to see and hold him
and to meet my new little cousin.

We're all going to be glad and cry
and want to hold him when we see him.
He might have you nose, or cheek,
and his daddy's personality.

It must be hard to see all the faces
and to have them always stare at you.
You're brave for what you did and strong,
and you're brave to be 15 and pregnant.

*This is my cousin who is indeed pregnant and she's 15. She's already 6 months. She's having a little boy named Daven. We're all happy for her and this is just something to show her that I still love her and that I admire her braveness and courage to go through this and to keep this little bundle of joy that we all can't wait to meet.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Awe, Hunny. Such a sweet dedication to your cousin. I really liked it. For a non-rhyming poem it flowed really well. It was very heartfelt & so sweet & cute. Ah. I love children :]

    Some things though :

    First, The title.. I love it :] BUT. pregnet is actually spelled 'pregnant'

    You're going to be the best you can be
    and I have faith that you will try your best.

    ^ To be completley honest.. I didn't like the repitition of the word 'best' in both of those lines.. It made it sound kinda crowded & just crashed it.

    and to touch your for the first time.
    ^ your should be 'you'

    He might have you nose, or cheek,

    ^ you should be 'your'

    You're brave for what you did and strong,
    and you're brave to be 15 and pregnant.

    ^ Ok, I didn't really like the wording of the first line.. I think you should re-word it to: You're brave & strong for what you did. But that's just my opinion :]

    Also, I don't like the repitition of brave in both of the lines.. They are just too close together [my opinion].

    I still really loved this. I'll give it a 5/5. Overall rating though: about 4.6

    Beautiful dedication, sweetie.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by *~"Hot Chocolate" author*~

    I really like your poem. Im going to my cousins baby shower tomorrow. She's 20, but I still really get your poem and now have respect for someone I don't even know. =D

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