Good poem. i liked the deepness

your servant:
david

That is such a beautiful poem! The use of the words was amazing and the vocabulary was outstanding. I really loved the rhythem and the rhyme pattern of each stanza. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5

<3Tayyy

5/5 wow that is wow. i LOVED it. its truely amazing.. i love your words and the imagey and emotion in this poem. absolutley wonderful.

Wow. This is so beautiful! It was so deep, and powerful. The imagery was amazing. & It had a lot of emotions, and feelings in it. The vocabulary usage was amazing, as well as the word choice. The rhythm was really good. & The flow was perfect.

So beautifully penned.

Bri x

Wow this is gorgeous, and it flows so deep and true, wow wow wow, this is amazing 5/5
gabriella

An outstanding allusion and clear verse. A vocab rich with metaphors.

Excellent!!! nice job I loved it!

Awww thats so passionate haha it realy painted a picture for me, fantastic write!! the flow was great!!!

Very nice, very short, very good meaning, I lvoe it, 5/5!, Keep up the good work!