by Curry Mar 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I don't know whats happened to you, |
by firexdancer
This is so sad, yeah i think it might flow better if ya broke it up, but it is gorgeous, its so depressing how people can change, |
by Kristina
Awww this is really good. and i like it a lot. the flow wasn't all that good, i think you should break it into stanza's and it would flow better, but the poem it's self is amazing! 5/5 |