Now that one was awesome it actually hit home here for a few yrs back )meqaning my ex but its gr8 exspecially for u to feel all that already for ur age

I reali like the wai u end all ov ur poems
vry vry gr8 work
i like all the poems ov urz tht iv red so far
keep up the awesome work
.x

Extreamly beautiful, very well written, and wonderful word choice, keep it up.

I love this poem!!! a definite 5/5!!! you assert where you are as a poet in this piece of work!!!! love it!!!

Itz pretty good lines 4 lines it getts better nice poem keep it up

Very well written... you have talent....keep up the good work... 5/5

This is an amazing poem. It is beautifuly written. It is absolutely beautiful. 5/5

Kalee

Why are your love poems so sad?
Great job any way. nice flow
5/5

Really well writen great job nice flow 5/5

This is truly another awesome poem. It is well written and deserve an 5/5 !!!......=)

Awww this is such a sad poem. it has alot of strong emotions in it. i love the ending.. its a very good poem. keep up the good work 5/5