Phone Calls

by Kidpoetry   Apr 7, 2004


Ring, ring, ring, baby
Please pick up the phone
I need to talk to you
I'm feeling all alone

I need to hear you love me
And that you will never leave
For a thought of life without you
I cannot conceive

You're all i ever wanted
You're all I'll ever need
You're more important to me
Than money is to greed

Baby please pick up
I long to hear you speak
Because i know the things you say
Are not said tongue in cheek

I told you that I'm yours
And you replied that you are mine
And once we are together
Our love will be divine

Because we have that real love
The kinda that lasts forever
And though we may be far apart
Our love will help endeavor

Rough roads lay ahead
In our future's path
But we shall persevere through it
Our love shields us from the wraith

So baby please pick up
I told you I'm addicted
If your voice i don't hear at night
Then insomnia is predicted

I cannot go to sleep at night
If we don't conversate
I want us to talk for hours on end
I don't care if it gets late

We can talk about our vision
Of watching the sun set in the sky
As we cuddle up together
And both begin to cry

And as i glare into your eyes
And watch a tear run down your face
I realize in that very moment
I don't want to be any other place

But as I wait still for your tone
These thoughts soon disappear
And quickly are replaced
By one constant dreadful fear

Its hits me like a ton of bricks
And i become very dizzy
You cant answer the phone rite now
For you are in some way busy

So i am going to bed alone tonight
Without your voice so comforting
I now hang up in agony
Of hearing my unanswered ring

But as i am understanding
At you, I'm not upset
How could i be at the person
Whom my best day is when we met

So instead i will fight off my anxiety
And try and get some sleep
And as i lay my head down thinking
I envision our love so deep

These thoughts of you shall stay,
Wit me throughout the night
As long as we may talk tomorrow
I will eventually be alright

Amber baby...this poem is for you. This is just to give you an idea of the torture i feel whenever we cannot talk on the phone or even on the net. It kills me...but i deal wit it as best i can....cuz i love you baby..always and forever!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    Beautiful, i loved it. I remember the days when i felt like that. I sensed the emotion and loved the originality. keep it up. take care

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    Still waiting on that new poem Seanie..write faster! :) Michelle & Craig... :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    Seanie where have ya been??? miss your poems!! talk soon, Michelle(*& Craig!) ;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachel

    Hey this a great poem Sean so keep up the good work and never stop dreaming big!! Thanx a bunch and love always,
    ~Rachel~
    P.S. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work.

  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    oh the agonys of a long distance relationship, the constant pineing, waiting and longing for someone who lives in yr heart yet seemingly outta reach. even the briefest of contacts rests perturbed emotions and this poem brilliantly portrays that dilhema that we both seem to be going through my friend. found myself smiling and frowning in recognition at the majority of this piece, personaly identifying with most of these lines. it `kills me` too sean.
    `i need to hear you love me` oh yes, a constant daily reassurance that things are still the same. even if they said it 50times yesterday, today is another day and the fear that things have changed, brought on by not being able to tangably see it with yr own eyes, creeps into the mind every morning. i love the `than money is to greed` very unusual but using the old poetical licence to full effect there, and emphasising that this girl is yr addiction of the heart, yr fix. the only thing in the world thats gonna make you feel better. clever stuff.
    and it goes on `insomnia predicted`,`cannot go to sleep at night` amen to that sean, know exactly how that feels. michelle is 6hrs behind me so trying to work in our chats has caused massive destruction to our sleeping patterns, but jus goes to show when people want something they find the time for it.
    those last two stanzas perfectly capture all the languid emotional turmoil of being apart, going to sleep in a cold empty bed with thoughts racing around the mind, a restless uneasiness that only the dead of sleep can bring relief.
    but the best part for me sean has to be `rough roads lay ahead, in our futures path, but we shall persevere throught it,our love shields us from the wraith`. it a little comforting to know im not the only one going through this `torture`, this commotion of the senses, but my heart goes out to you because i wouldnt wish this h@ll on anyone. i really hope you and Amber get to the end of your journey as im sure you will, and live happily ever after. maybe we could all meet up one day and compare experiences! thanx for all the kind comments you have left on my poems, so sorry it has taken so long to reply but im sure you can understand why. all the best sean 5/5 superb.

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