Aww! i love this poem, you rock! i love all your poems, don't stop writing!
xx

THIS IS A GREAT POEM David. I loved it. and u r not a fake. You are a great poet. keep up the good writing.
5/5

Kalee

Hey dave! another great one. Although id rather see you being happy and writing on the positive side of things u poetry always has this feel like its drawing you in when its somber. Cant help but read faster and faster as i go :P And btw your as real as i am... hope thats a good thing :)

Yes this was a very good poem with deep meaning and emotion. I think meny can find themselves in this.

Good job keep up =)

Hey!
A great poem again, but sad.
I like the words you've chosen.
good work! Keep it up
Hebe

Awe. =[ tis sad.. 5/5 excellent poem..

This is another gorgeous one, youre in my favorites! never stop writing,
5/5
luv gabriella

So why begin, What you can't end ... it's great, emotional stuff - i love it !

Wow, your poems are so alive, they speak for themselves and for you; you are great poet.

Awww David....This was so sad!!! I loved it! The emotion was absolutly amazing! You are such a great poet...And you know I'm always here for you this is so great one of your best poems for sure!!! I loved this and I love you lol
Kaila

This really is sad and depressing. Still a great write nonetheless. The last stanza was my favorite. The whole poem had a nice flow though. 5/5

marcella

Good poem. Very sad and depressing. It had a nice flow. 5/5

Wow the last stanza is very powerful. it didn't really flow all that well, but i liked it, but b/c it was choppy i gave you a 4... you deserve more like a 4.5, but they don't have those unfortunately. nice job though, keep it up

That was very well written. I have to agree with james tho its a little sad seeing you write like like this tho instead of about happy things but it was still very good. Oh and your not fake your as real as we all are. Unless we are all fake as well :S.

Andrew

I can kinda relate to this poem. it's well written and i give it 5/5.

A very somber poems. well written though! i lkie it a lot!!
5/5

Wow, short lines but it was very powerful! i can relate to this. sad, but brilliant poem! 5/5

~Kristina

Awww that is so heartfelt and deep!! i loved the scond last stanza, it reali put a meaning to the poem!! great work and great poem, 5/5 from me!!

xoxo Lucy

These were my favorite lines:

So why begin
What you cant end

and

So on this night
I lie awake
I see clearly now
I am a fake

Those are awesome lines.. they just flow so well.. I love this poem.. it's wonderful. Emotional.. and rythmic.. great job!!!! 5/5 as always my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.