I like it its cute.. nd trust me i can relate.=)

The love, oh this is real. but you need to edit this and take out the '. so the poem flows perfectly.

5/5 tho. david

It was good, but i gave you a 4, mainly b/c it's so generic. now i see you said it's unfinished, so my advice to you for the second part is to spice it up, make it unique. but it was a cute poem, it's just very generic, keep writing i'm sure it'll get better.

Hey the changes. whoa. you made it perfecto!

i love it! it was so nice to read. i just sat back and read an awesome poem.

5/5 David

Another nice poem by you...
no body does know how we feel about our lovers, here i can say if we are true lovers then we do know,
great job once again

Ah wow, i get what you feel, and you expressed it beautifully in the poem! amazing job---tara

Beautiful poem.
Very sweet.
Great flow and I like the words you used.

" But each day gets harder,
As the weeks without you go by. "

Love that line.
Great work.
Take care

Aww,
i like it.
in a way its kinda the same for me about one guy, but the thing is we are together. :]
nice job
xx