Very well written and this here poem brought tears to my eyes, i have been where you are and i still battle with loving him or not. suicide is not the awnser but the pain is hard to handle, great write, very heart felt and the imagery is good ,the emotion is raw, great job

Very good poem...you have a lot of creative imegery...there is only one key to joy...i hope that all goes well with her...

Wow! This is wow! Your descriptions, and choice of words were amazing! I love how the ending sums it up so perfectly! Wow!! Wonderful job!