by Annabel Mar 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She always smiles, |
I could really relate to this poem, it was perfect, theres nothing i would change! |
by David
You need to take out the ' in the second line. a bit of advice read your own poem straight after you submit it. and make all nec. changes. |
by Kristina
This is really sad, but i like it a lot. it was filled with emotion and it was deep! wonderful job you did on it! 5/5 |