This is really sad, but i like it a lot. it was filled with emotion and it was deep! wonderful job you did on it! 5/5

~Kristina

You need to take out the ' in the second line. a bit of advice read your own poem straight after you submit it. and make all nec. changes.

5/5 still. David

I could really relate to this poem, it was perfect, theres nothing i would change!
much love and many kisses,
bex