Hey
i liked it...its a good story...a little rough in places but it was good...and ive actually gone though something like that before...its confusing...there really isnt any other way to describe it..lol..but anyway i liked your poem...good job

W0W THiS iS A PRETTY G00D P0EM! G00D J0B! THANKS F0R THE C0MMENT 0N MiNE! KEEP UP THE GREAT W0RK, iM SURE U'LL GET MUCH BETTER!
JUSTiNA