Be Yourself

I'm myself and if I wasn't I wouldn't know who I am or who to be :D 5/5

I like this poem because it is simple, honest and to the point. In a world where identies and personalities get mascaraded so often, it is always an important message for one to rememer to be themselves.

-Tainted Miko

Aww, I really liked this one. It was a great topic to write about. I agree with everything you wrote about. You did a great job!

I don't understand why some people can't just be them self
^^them self should be themself

Why do they wanna be like everyone else?
^^wanna needs to be want to

You gotta stand up for yourself,
^^gotta needs to be have got to

I'm sorry if I offend you with me correcting your mistakes it doesn't mean I didn't think it was a good poem, i'm just trying to help you improve it. I really did enyjoy this poem. Keep them comming. I will be keeping an eye out for some new ones! =]

Keep writing!
Cayce

This is a great poem about todays society, and al the words are good and the flow is ok great great great

*,,I love this poem. It's not only beautifully written, but also extremly true. It had me nodding my head all the way through it:P.
Take Care,,*