Comments : Be Yourself

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    You meant accept! But seriously this is great, really.. i know so many people who won't accept people for who they are, it's terrible! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    *,,I love this poem. It's not only beautifully written, but also extremly true. It had me nodding my head all the way through it:P.
    Take Care,,*

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is a great poem about todays society, and al the words are good and the flow is ok great great great

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww, I really liked this one. It was a great topic to write about. I agree with everything you wrote about. You did a great job!

    I don't understand why some people can't just be them self
    ^^them self should be themself

    Why do they wanna be like everyone else?
    ^^wanna needs to be want to

    You gotta stand up for yourself,
    ^^gotta needs to be have got to

    I'm sorry if I offend you with me correcting your mistakes it doesn't mean I didn't think it was a good poem, i'm just trying to help you improve it. I really did enyjoy this poem. Keep them comming. I will be keeping an eye out for some new ones! =]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    I like this poem because it is simple, honest and to the point. In a world where identies and personalities get mascaraded so often, it is always an important message for one to rememer to be themselves.

    -Tainted Miko

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    I'm myself and if I wasn't I wouldn't know who I am or who to be :D 5/5