by Tricky Daze Mar 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Please hold my hand and tell me that you're alright |
The rhyming pattern was a little off and some verses had more lines than others but a really sweet poem hun |
by Megamidget3
Very good flow of emotions, and great take. keep it up! 5/5! |
Very nice poem...the flow was ok nicely written!! |
by Dark Demise
Very deep poem, Lost it's flow on a couple parts, but over all great meaning, great story, good poem, 5/5, |