Dear..Me,

by TheRevelation   Mar 3, 2007


Dear..Me,

Pain has now hit my empty,broken heart,
It is as if birds never come out to sing again,
It is as if the world has turned black like night,
My heaven has now burned and my wings take no flight,

Tears have now clouded my judgment and eyes,
It is as if I cry like the rain when it storms,
It is as if I`m drowning in my own woe,
Thanks to you I`ve given up love a long time ago,

Ice now covers my soul blocking a way out,
It is as if a snow storm has entered my body,
It is as if no warm touch can break through,
It is as if...I`ll never be able to stop loving you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    That was fabulous. The thing to me that stuck out the most were the vivid descriptions. The flow was flawless & the emotions were clear. Wonderful job! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Aw this was a really touching poem. lot of emotion. thank u heaps for ur comments. xx