Wow...powerful words......this poem is very good..flow was good, use of words were good...good job...

Hey thanks for the comment! I looked at some of your stuff as well and your pretty talented. Check out my other poems, "Tears of Joy" and "Bullets"

You have some very powerful words. i can relate to this poem and i can sort of feel the pain that is being described in this poem.

Wow. This is a very strong poem. and it really touched me. I can relate in away. I really enjoy reading your work keep it up.
Elaine