Diggin This poem
Very Very Very Nice
I like it
Not much critique to say except
watch your flow a little bit
but the words and work
is just magnificent
great job
5/5

Cheers for the comment. Well here i am, about to go threought your 'poems. To quote the previous guy 'Diggin this one'. Loved it.
Was deeper than a poem, kinda ran through like a scene from a film.
Loved it.
Keep up the great work
5/5
-Black night-