by Rahl The Layman Lord Mar 3, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Steeds spurting forward |
I lvoe your intensity in this..its jsut builds....ur a great writer ur in my favs...keep it up |
by firexdancer
Ya! i like this! it flows perfectly, and you can see the poem, you worded it so well. 5/5 |
by Kristina
Wow this is really good! i think you did an amazing job on this poem! it flowed really nicely! 5/5 |
Kewls!!! lol thxs for the comments and great poem....now lets go back in time and play joust...ill watch haha jk okies =) |
Hey Jas i really loved that one, and even better i kinda of understood it....in a sense, but then again you are recieving this from the queen of dits, lol well i give it a 5/5 |