Red

by RavishingEruption   Mar 4, 2007


The blood pouring down my wrist is red
It fills my mind with final dread

I don't want to feel this pain anymore
Eternal peace is my final lure

I hear a voice clear through the dark
"I cannot yet contain your heart"

I awake from this dream, bleeding in bed
Now I know why I hate the color RED.

This is about a cutter who is saved in a final atempt to take her life. I hope it speaks to people some. hopefully!

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I totally understand it.
    for how short it is, ths story was told so boldly

    great job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Ohh, blood, my favorite subject (kidding) this was good, I enjoyed reading it

  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Short & sweet!
    fab work.. getz me thinkin alot
    keep it up
    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    A controversial color. good poem

    your servant:
    david

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