Palm of your Hand

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Mar 4, 2007


At times in the night I recall his memories,
Filled with heartbreak and meant-to-be's.
Then you came in and picked up the broken pieces,
Made sure not to drop any through you finger creases.

I have a very strong affection,
for you. But I'm scared of rejection.
You have me in the very palm of your hand,
I am under your control and command.

You brought me back into the light,
I know I'll fall asleep dreaming of you tonight.
I got these feelings, and you don't even know,
But you pulled me back up, when I was low.

These feelings inside are just so intense,
I just can't stand all of this suspense.
I guess for now, I'll keep wishing on my star,
But as long as you're in my mind, you'll never be far.

~*Who Cares?*~
i wrote this for someone. if anyone wants me to write a poem for them, i can. i don't mind:) i really love how this poem turned out, and i can relate to some of it so that was good.

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  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    I love this. its awesome!!! great job you got talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow, all of your poems are great!
    All full of emotion and the structire and flow is fantastic.
    Really is what poetry is all about!!!!!!!!!
    And this wasnt even about you-brilliant once again!!! 5/5
    Aish

  • 16 years ago

    by edel

    Can you make me a poem,about what's going on whit my life now???? coz i can't put them into words how i feel about her!!! pls reply to me tnx...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this one.
    Again, it was a great opening and each stanza was better than the last.
    The flow was flawless throughout, and the ending was beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Great job!!! you did well with this one!
    keep up the great work!
    amanda