Comments : 5 crys and 6 lies

  • I can really relate to this poem.. life can suck, but there is hope, and there is happiness on the other side. *Hugs you tight* Good work on the writing.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Amazing poem! The way you continue a theme throughout all of the verses is great!
    5 stars from me