Saved the best for last...

"I cant make you love me for me if you don't want to.
Cause I cant give it up to you,
Have some patience,
Give me sometime.
If it seems like I'm stalling a little,
Its not a crime.
I have the right,
To keep whats mine,"

this was great, i might just like you haha, just playing....I loved this poem, for more reasons than I can say. Keep it up

-Lord Rahl-

What's yours is yours, no one can take that away. Beautifully written.