I really really like this one

I really like this poem.
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..::Broken Lullaby::..

Love the poem, it has a powerful start that really draws you in. The flow was brilliant for most if it, although occasionally I felt the lines were too long in some stanzas, and in this verse I got a little lost:

The chance that you wouldn't risk
Of where you just then fall
Where you believe it its meant to be
Then its worth it all

but it's a really beautiful poem, keep writing, and thankyou ever so much for the comment
- Polly x

It's long O.o but really good ^_^...keep up the good work XD