David!!!! I know, I know. I'm a bad friend. I haven't commented your stuff in for never! Lol. Anyways, this poem was just amazing. I love it cuz it's all so true and something we do see everyday. Gracias, for writing this!! I really liked it!! Never stop!! Love ya!

-` Liz

That was really touching......and true at the same time......teens at this age in day do not respect themselves or others or EVER think about their future and the things that they do will jepozie that.....keep writing and making a diffrence.........:)
-say goodbye and go

Good piece of work (as always tho). I've been readin your poems lately, can say I've gone trough 2/3 of them. Love your style and everything, you're really really good at this. Added ya to my favourites. And yeap, wouldn't mind if you check my work n give me your opinion bout it :)
Much love, Br0k3n

I love it =) i know what your writing about, our society is getting worse..great work though

This is so true, it's sad! 5/5

The message is wonderful. the only errors i found were typos and use of numbers. like certain things seemed like they should be plural. reread the poem, you'll find grammatical things.

Sadly, this is so true, each word got me, this is a remarkable peice