Too Good Is True [Quatern]

by BrixGoesxRawr   Mar 4, 2007


Too good to be true; coming true.
Perfectly perfect in her eyes.
Imperfections seen as beauty.
Golden; are the words that he speaks.

Admiring his innocence.
Too good to be true; coming true.
Adoring his looks & his touch.
Nothing can compare to our love.

Smiles shine as bright as the sun.
Chasing each other at the park.
Too good to be true; coming true.
Starting food fights; splashing water.

The crazy love found in your dreams.
Walking out, & becoming real.
Making your life worth living for.
Too good to be true; coming true.

Brianna Carter
March 3, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I have never read such an interesting poem, it was beautiful
    i think the flow didn't run so smooth lithium had this right"i love your style of writing. the way you pull a poem together is outstanding"

    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    This poem is very cute. again, i love your style of writing. the way you pull a peom together is outstanding. well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Very unique poem! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the great work, i can't wait to read more of your poetry! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwww. That's such a good poem I want to meet the idiot who low rated it! It should at least be a 4.8! but I'll give you a 5/5 because this was a good poem. Keep up the great work.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww cute, kind of generic, just work on the flow and the wording a bit, but it was good.

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