by Fsams Mar 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The sun hid behind the horizone |
by Jiyaa
Superb description n the imagery is vivid. lovely piece. |
by Nix
Very original piece. It isn't classic love poem, which is great. You created unique atmosphere. Flow is excellent and this piece is written greatly. |
by nikki
It was very creative. your mind with writing is just beautiful. the way you express the idea is undeniably amazing. 5/5 |
by Jiyaa
Very metaphorical and creative. 5/5 worth piece |
100% descriptive and i liked it coz it had a unique style. |