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  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    "I am rather good at faking
    Half the time you couldn't tell
    Its only when its too much
    You will see my life is a living hell"

    "When I see or talk to her
    I cant even look her in the eye
    Because when I do the thoughts come back
    And all I want to do is cry "

    "My love for her is in the past
    Is what I say before I turn off the light
    But the worst lies we tell
    Are the ones we whisper before we say good night. . . "

    -those really all hit me hard and this poem was amazing i dont even want to say it was too long i think it was perfect i really love it amzing job!

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