Love is a game

by Foolish Heart   Mar 4, 2007


Love is complicated,
it's like a game.
you get hurt, you recover,
it's kinda a shame.

you explore new places with your partner,
you think they got your back.
but put your guard down,
and they'll surely attack.

you're all alone,
there's no one you can trust.
friends aren't there,
they just leave you in the dust/

you meet new people,
you make new friends.
you make new enemies,
you'll fight till the end.

whose the playa,
it's hard to tell,
they trick and use you,
and watched you when you fell.

there's always a challenge,
there's always a goal.
to find that special someone,
who will steal away your soul.

so God has the controls,
he plays the game.
so when love goes wrong,
you're not the one to blame.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a very good poem and rhymed really well. We know how it feels to live in such misery. I think everything rhymed very well except for the following:

    Fourth Stanza

    -I think this stanza just needs a little working. It's really beautiful, I'm not trying to be harsh but it has to work a little bit to rhyme a little better.

    you meet new people,
    you make new friends.
    you make new enemies,
    you'll fight till the end.

    Fifth Stanza

    whose the playa,
    it's hard to tell,
    they trick and use you,
    (and watched you when you fell.)

    -Could be a little better. I know you could do it.

    Other then that, Everything was perfectly well written. Great JoB!

    5.5 You deserved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Simply, wonderful. great job

    --**Skye~

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A great poem, i have no other words for it =) 5/5

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