This is the first one of your's I've read and I found it very interesting. The feelings behind it are good but the words don't really flow that well together. A little work and this could be great.

I'd love to hear what you have to say back!
How did I end up here
Hold me close
and My first love
are all one's that I'd love to hear what people have to say about them. =)

Awww sweeet poem! i really liked it! it was awesome! short, but it was really well written! i liked what it was about! 5/5

~Kristina

I agree with Kate.. a great poem with allot of feeling

Awe it made me smile :) its very sweet :) 5/5

Very beautiful and sensual....can't believe it's been down voted. Love the imagery and word choices! All the best Debbie

Great very beautiful
i really liked it
keep up the great work!

Absolutely wonderful, great job!

Absolutely beautiful, wise word choice and a great penned poem.Votes are nothing , hold your head up and pen some more wonderful poetry young Lady. Excellent job.

Wow... whatqa gr8 wrk..... short but meaningfull gd wrk

That is a beautiful poem, and the words you chosen are fantastic, it makes the poem so interesting, and different, which is amazing. keep writting 5/5. xxtake carexx
if you get the chance will you read a few of my poems please, i would deeply appreciate it. xx

Short and sweet. A positively beautiful poem. Good job.

Can I put this in my myspace?
I love this poem.
I'll say it's yours.

This is a truly amazing poem.
It made me smile.
The vocabulary made it an interesting read, not so same-ish. If you understand where im coming from.
5/5
-Lauren