Yet again you amaze me you're now one of my favorites...this one really hit me hard too...beautiful

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That has got to be one of the best poems i have read...you did so good on it...keep up your good work i look forword to reading more of your work!!!

♥ BRiT ♥

Well well... This is soemthing extraordinary... Very touching... Wonderful poem!

Sweet, touching, and full of emotion. Nicely written, well done!

5/5

This was very good I like the way it reads like a story,good flow also.

I do not know how you can write so beautifully with such a sad poem... but you're good at it