by albert padilla Mar 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
From the moment that i met you, |
by *Charisma*
Pretty piece. The third and fourth lines were my fav. How true that is, whether it's for the happy reasons here or the sad reasons if it ends. A nice piece. The only line I wasn't crazy about was "I'm falling from above." because it sounds too forced just to rhyme with love. But other than that, good job! |
This is great. I've just fallen in love for the first time in my life lately and this is exactly how I feel. |