The love is dead

by Kaila   Mar 4, 2007


Confused...
Upset...
Hopeful...
Alone...

Confused...
Why would you tell me you love me
When I know you really don't

Upset...
I'm here wishing the feelings you show are real
But to you they always won't

Hopeful...
Deep down you love me inside
I'll pray and pray till the day I die

Alone...
You abandoned me...here I'm hurt
And this is where I lie

p.s. wrote this in like 5 min. don't criticize plz

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know the pain of having a broken heart and being confused about your true feelings, there is no greater pain. You'll only learn from past heartbreak and you'll be able to use this knowledge in the long run. Excellent job and great meaning 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    For a few minutes it's a realy good poem. Short and realy good. Keep up the great work.. Thank you for the comments and rates! God bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I coul fell the emotion in this one, its sad. but i love it! great job

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I coul fell the emotion in this one, its sad. but i love it! great job

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I think this is cool. i love the style. well done hun.
    Much love and many kisses,
    Bex