I dont think anyone would criticize sometimes poems like this are the most amazing ones at least i though so great job 5/5
Take care
xoHSxo

Aww this is really sad but i like it a lot. i could feel the emotion in it. i think you did a wonderful job on writing it! and i really like the layout of the poem! 5/5

~Kristina

I think this is cool. i love the style. well done hun.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

I coul fell the emotion in this one, its sad. but i love it! great job

I coul fell the emotion in this one, its sad. but i love it! great job

For a few minutes it's a realy good poem. Short and realy good. Keep up the great work.. Thank you for the comments and rates! God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

I know the pain of having a broken heart and being confused about your true feelings, there is no greater pain. You'll only learn from past heartbreak and you'll be able to use this knowledge in the long run. Excellent job and great meaning 5/5