This place does, in fact, exist...it just takes a while to find. with the right people, though...finding it is SO much easier. good job

~SSS~

Wow this was a good poem 5/5 great job keep it up.

I don't know what it was; I can't pinpoint it, but something about this poem just made me love it. It was brilliant, and I just wanted to keep reading more.

I loved the repetition of "...just for the sake of..." - great work, overall.

A very interesting question rising in this poem. If there were no guns and war was meaningless, would we have peace. Liked the way you presented it, a definite 5/5

Hey hun it was great c u at school on thursday on vac

(: This piece is very unique. I loved the first lines of each stanza ... wondering for the sake of wondering. We often times as people wonder about the things you stated in your poem, but sometimes feel we need a reason to think about them. I love that you admitted sometimes we think, just merely to think (: The flow was solid, and I really enjoyed reading this piece. And I truly believe this place exists, so don't ever let the sorrow, or agitation shut your eyes from it!

Good job!
Keep it up!