I loved this so much!
The first stanza had me completely hooked and it just kept getting better.
That last stanza..what a beautiful ending!

Aw! Wow, I love this. It is so beautiful. & So very captivating. The emotion in this is very deep & strong. & so easy to relate too.

It flowed really well & nothing seemed forced at all.

One thing:

the ignore when I ask how. [the should be 'then']

I absolutley adored the last two stanzas. They were deffinitely my favorites & the last two lines of the poem, summed this up perfectly.

Amazing job. Keep it up.

Bri x

COMMENT # 1
the ending is fabuous.. as well as the emotion... a very strong poem.. the last line of the first stanza.. seems a bit forced.. but other than that an enjoyable read

Really good job on this one i could feel what you were saying in it like...alot

5/5