Awww That was such a sweet poem!
I really liked it.Specially the fifth stanza.Great Write.
Oh and on the first line of second stanza it says dint i think its meant to say Dont.
Anyway keep up the good work! 5/5

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Okay 1st this poem has some grammer problems fix those up the poem will flow better 2. I seem to be seeing a pattern with all of your poems try something different