Nothing to gain

I actually really like the subject, like really love it. i think your vocab is great. your rhymes were aight, a couple were a little if-y... but sall good. and i really felt a connection with the girl you were explaining
but i dont think there was really a rhythm in it. i kinda just ended up reading it like a story...
but yea, really good job
5/5

--> Sandra

I don't believe that anybody can look in the mirror and be truly happy with everything about thereselves, it's normal to feel unhappy with certain things. I liked the poem and the choice of words was great, the flow was good and the imagery was very real. Excellent work 5/5

I think that the title is great! And that the flow whilst unusual worked!
Your poetry is so easy to read. I really likes this one. Well done x

I like the ending stanza, it was the most powerful of your whole poem and made your feeling more expressed. It summed up the poem well. You should try to start using punctuation on your poetry, I find it's a lot easier for a fellow poet to read your poem and get the flow you want if you put commas or periods or maybe none at all to show no pause. Just a word of advice. But kudos.

Good poem i liked it... keep it up 5/5