Good poem. Very sad.
It had a good structure.
Good job 5/5

This is how i have felt so many time. its like i know this poem, its my soul. the flow was excellent. made this poem perfect. bravo!

5/5 David

I can really relate with this poem. it was my favorite of yours so far. thank you for sharing hun!
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

The emotions are very raw. You did a great job with it but sometimes expressing your emotions through imagery instead of writing it all out can go the distance. Anyway, it is beautifully written.

This poem is sad, but i like it. you did a great job with the emotions

Good poem i liked it... keep it up 5/5

I like the ending stanza, it was the most powerful of your whole poem and made your feeling more expressed. It summed up the poem well. You should try to start using punctuation on your poetry, I find it's a lot easier for a fellow poet to read your poem and get the flow you want if you put commas or periods or maybe none at all to show no pause. Just a word of advice. But kudos.

I think that the title is great! And that the flow whilst unusual worked!
Your poetry is so easy to read. I really likes this one. Well done x

I don't believe that anybody can look in the mirror and be truly happy with everything about thereselves, it's normal to feel unhappy with certain things. I liked the poem and the choice of words was great, the flow was good and the imagery was very real. Excellent work 5/5

I actually really like the subject, like really love it. i think your vocab is great. your rhymes were aight, a couple were a little if-y... but sall good. and i really felt a connection with the girl you were explaining
but i dont think there was really a rhythm in it. i kinda just ended up reading it like a story...
but yea, really good job
5/5

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