Comments : Venus

  • 17 years ago

    by John Long

    Wow! A very erotic display of Love. You seem to have a talent for eroticism.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tony

    So Sexually charged it's almost Electric! Really looking forward to reading your next one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fran

    It's such a welcome change to read about sexuality from the woman's side of things.

    From breasts to feminine core you move
    Tongue coming to rest in my swollen groove
    Slowly you suck, lick bite and nibble
    Causing warm molten lava over your face to dribble
    Harder and faster you lick bite and suck
    Waves of pleasure making me arc and buck
    My core is bursting, I'm ready to explode
    Into your mouth shoots my hot molten load

    Great stuff, so enjoyable!

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I liked the style and flow of this piece.
    "Juddering and shaking our lovings complete
    Bodies spent from our sexual feast
    Kissing deeply our love we declare
    Forever in awe of this love we share"
    Love the ending, 5/5. Em x