by .K.i.T.t.Y. Mar 5, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Years have past, |
by Annabel
The other one is so much better. This just sounds like you've tried to write a poem - whereas the other has real feelings in it... (Y) xxx |
by Rebecca
How cute is that!!! |
by Kristina
I like this one this BEST! the other one was good too, but this one was better! so i think you should give her this one! 5/5 |
Aw this was a sweet lil diddy. well done hun. |
by Poetvoices
I like this one, but I think the other one is better. True, they both say the same thing, but the rhythm's better in the other one, I think! 5/5 anyway! :D |