I like this one a lot to because it still shows the love and care while having a nice ring to it - I think I'd go with this one. great job also 5/5

I like this one, but I think the other one is better. True, they both say the same thing, but the rhythm's better in the other one, I think! 5/5 anyway! :D
PV

Aw this was a sweet lil diddy. well done hun.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I like this one this BEST! the other one was good too, but this one was better! so i think you should give her this one! 5/5

~Kristina

How cute is that!!!

The other one is so much better. This just sounds like you've tried to write a poem - whereas the other has real feelings in it... (Y) xxx