Short but i like it

I really like the rhyming and everything about this poem. It's short and sweet, and I especially like the part about the love being a secret. Very nicely written :)

Your rhyming in the poems ive read so far is very good, perhaps you could make them a little bit longer? i can see you have a lot to say through your poetry =]
Geo

U have da telent 2 say A LOT OF THING IN JST A FEW SENTENCES.

keep-up-da-gud-workkkkk.

5/5

This is a rlly good poem. i like how its shot but yet to the point.. it has very strong meanin in this n thats wht makes this poem.. 5/5 plz check my most recent poem.. thx