Whispers in the wind

by jason   Mar 5, 2007


Whispers in the wind
carrying along all the sin
dragging it down into the water
where not a single step could falter
into the sea of lies
listening to all the cries
of those who have been betrayed
laid to rest in their graves

whispers in the wind
taking all of a familey and kin
never to see them again
stealing hearts
breaking familey's apart
leaving all their loved ones in the dark

whispers in the wind
waiting for a new life to begin
to tear apart
leaving with all the sin
because in the end
we all come and go
to begin again
just like whispers in the wind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...Ooo, like how it has 'whispers in the wind' on both the first lines and the final line. It wasn't exactly something I like but I enjoyed it nonetheless. There is a part in the second stanza where the rhyming seems forced. A slight flow prob on the last stanza but can be overlooked. It's different which is a good thing.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by supaflyhonkyguy

    Hauntingly beautiful dude, especially the last stanza, i swear i could almost feel the wind blowing while i was reading this. very nice, definate 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Whoa. i voted. def 5. this poem was dark. very. loved it, somehow. mysteriously.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    This is an outstanding poem! I love the fact that it's saying how the simplest lie can do so much damage. Another great piece of work, Jason!

  • 17 years ago

    by always wanted a friend like u_lenise_

    Jason,
    I love this poem to i can relate to it i think thats why i like it so much it is written well keep up the good work

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