Jason...I actually started to cry! Maybe it was because I wasen't having a great day and needed to cry, but your poem sure did it. It was just so beautiful and painful.It set off a pain in my stomach. It was just really good, I truly love it.

This poem is so beautiful you did a great job you can feel the pain as you read this poem keep up the good work

I really loved the words you chose to describe your feelings. it was filled will such emotion that really shined thru your words. well done hun.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I loved your poem. so much emotion. youhave a real talent. good job

Very nice, very creative, good job, 5/5

Powerful poem. well done, i loved it. the imangination was great. bravo!

5/5 David

OKay, I really liked this one, it flowed VERY well. =)
-Ally