Flames

by President Dead   Mar 5, 2007


Take note of the fire,
See how it burns?
Can u feel It?
Can you feel the life coming out of you?

That's what its like to be me.

I'm walking out on my life,
I'm leaving it for dead,
It can fend for itself now,
All I can make out is red.

Watch the fire burn,
Feel it fry your skin,
The lights from the sky,
Are burning from within.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Short but very powerful poem. It is very unique and interesting. Atmosphere that you created is amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    A*

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    The last stanza was my favourite.
    I strong finish

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this one a lot. It reminds me of someone I know. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    I liked it but personally prefered your 'pure emotion' poems where they didint rhyme. I'm getting sick of rhyming poems (hypocritical i know)

    GA

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