Its so sad you feel that way.
i do like the poem a lot though. well written!!!
5/5
kat-x-

I can't get over how much your style and rhyming skills have changed. it's been a huge improvement. You rock my world.

Xoxoxox yours for eternity
Suz

I liked it but personally prefered your 'pure emotion' poems where they didint rhyme. I'm getting sick of rhyming poems (hypocritical i know)

GA

I like this one a lot. It reminds me of someone I know. 5/5

Ravyn

The last stanza was my favourite.
I strong finish

A*

Short but very powerful poem. It is very unique and interesting. Atmosphere that you created is amazing. 5/5