Broke and Cold

Wonderful write! It is hard to win me over in such a short piece... they really are difficult to pull off, but you have done so flawlessly. Your word choice was needless to say: interesting and intriguing. A short piece, while intricate and strong. A nicely captured moment, I enjoyed it!

Peace, Joe

Oh and I've run out of time I'm afraid, but I'll be back after work to critique the rest.

I liked this. It was about dying yes, but less obvious.
The blunt and subtle approach really paid off.
The icy heart image was very powerful, though I enjoyed all of the poem.
Just a little suggestion...I think you could get away with dropping "because" from the second line and "eventually" from the third. Just add a comma if you want to preserve the slow digression.
Thanks for sharing.

Another good write, the imagery is great and the poemhas stronge emotion, keep at it, your a great poet.