Hello World

by umbra   Mar 5, 2007


Smile World, for you live another day.
Laugh World, for your loved in every way.
Cry World, for each of us must feel pain.
Love World, for it is the greatest of all deeds.
Live World, for you bring tears to our eyes.
Sleep World, for I wish you sweet dreams and goodnight.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written I like how you display the your poem in a form of advice. Living in this world we will all go through what has being stated in the poem crying ...being loved etc. It was certainly a delightful to read this poem. Keep it up

    Excellent job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    I like how you put it into a way of seeing what the world is like nice work keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is beautiful advice to the world In a world of complex issues i would love to and have the will to smile, laugh, cry, love, live
    sleep t a great awakening of do it anyway.
    your poem says it all but you may want to google "anyway" as to further comformation that your wording is quite inspiring
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very short, but straight to the point, I liked the repetition of "world" in the begining, it was an interesting style of writting which I just so happen to like. I must say although short, this poem was excellently written, great work my friend! Keep up the fantastic work!

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was cute. And very original. I enjoyed it and each little world thing was adorable. Since it's such a cute short poem there's not much to critique on
    5/5

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