Concrete Jungle Struggle

by supaflyhonkyguy   Mar 5, 2007


Raise your fist in an endless struggle
Bleeding eyes searching for one another
Always there just to make you suffer
Theres just no justice for me

Watch a man mutilate his own brother
See a cop dealing coke to his mother
Watch him go home to his best friends lover
Theres Just no reason for me

All around money dealt under tables
What was out of Reach is now enabled
What comes next is unspeakable
A petafiles dream

Just another dirty rat being labled
Hanging on by a torn loose cable
My bodies numb, my mind disabled
Theres just no hope left for me

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Great imagery. I liked it. some stronger words would make it better, but its still a really good write.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    "Watch a man mutilate his own brother
    See a cop dealing coke to his mother
    Watch him go home to his best friends lover
    Theres Just no reason for me"

    I absolutely LOVED this verse. its wicked!!! well done, ANOTHER amazing piece. keep it up hun.
    Much love and many kisses,
    Bex

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Another great write but like before i have said you need to work in some stronger language and thats not a bad thing cause i need to work on it to. great write

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